Sunday, September 19, 2010

Spontaneous Poetry

So every once in a while some phrase pops into my head and then I follow it. Usually I think they're not so great, but this whole blog is about just writing and putting it out there, so here it is...

Can you come another time?
when I'm sitting on a pile of money,
on a wall surveying the ripe horizon,
sated from the luxe day
and looking for the choicest end?

Another time when I'm
receptive to dark whispers,
intimate sounds that slither
up my bones and wet my eyes?

Once more when I'm full
enough to listen, when it's perfect?


Lazarus Lupin said...

Very nice, I'm receptive to such elegance in wordage.

Lazarus Lupin
art and review

Criticlasm said...

Thank you!